CK Lynn

My characters don;t know that they're imaginary. I see their lives like a little movie in my head that i can alter when i want (yeh, I know that's kinda ...

Maybe if the the law started out as a way to stop a plague or something, and then the city leaders realized the power they had, so ven after the ...

Whenever I'm stuck, I lock myself up in my room, turn on some music and try to daydream myself into the story. Also--it doesn't have to be good as long ...

This was a very nice poem. I liked the imagery at the end. This piece flowed very well--the language was consistent in its tone and the lines consistent in their ...

Very interesting. I like the metaphorical journey idea, and the way you talked about it as being through a desert. "Solemn shadow" was the best phrase of the poem. This ...

I like the first line, it sounds very nice. The rest of it just doesn't fit together very well, especially the second line, which sounds very forced. I don't think ...

"Icicles like scissors snipping off dwarf finger." That line was great. There needs to be some more of that kind of imagery in the poem. It's very, very good, but ...

Hi. I'd love it if you could review this: please look at my comment on the bottom of the page first, please, because it's in a specific poetry form so ...

The repitition is because this is a pantoum, which is a form of poetry using a four-line verse. The first and third line of every verse is the second and ...

I say guy, my friend Em sitting next to me says girl

The flames are magic Her eyes won't pull away She's been called names before Pyro hooked with maniac Her eyes won't pull away She loves that word Pyro hooked with ...

Oh, I've wanted to do a sestina for so long but they never turn out. this is great. The only parts I had probl;ems with was the discription of a ...

I can't say I get the title. When I clicked on this I was thinking it was going to be something...well, I'm not really sure whast I was expecting but ...

I liked this piece. THere are a couple things I would change though: 1) Take out some of the questions. Don't delete them, just make it so they're sentances and ...

thankyouthankyouthankyou. I said Twilight wasn't so great at the lunch tabe the other day, and I swear the whole cafeteria got quiet. This may not be poetry, but it is ...